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Post by Smiles on Jun 19, 2014 20:04:35 GMT
A/N: three of us. Riolu [writer] Manectric [artist] and Pyroar [music person XD] artist's image [person's song here] 30 k later... [more of person's song here]
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Post by Smiles on Jun 19, 2014 20:07:12 GMT
hi! I'm also a grader.
Story
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Description
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Mechanics
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Overall
To be honest, I was not fully pleased with either the written work or the project as a whole. The consistent descriptive deficiency is hard to overlook. Combined with the intense grammar errors for a story of this rank and the inconsistencies among written word, artwork, and voice work, the outcome is not very bright here. [encouraging words of criticism]
Other aspects of this grade to be posted shortly.
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Post by Smiles on Jun 19, 2014 20:09:05 GMT
[Curating...]
Form
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Technique
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Background
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Outcome
This was a doozy to curate as a piece and a project as a whole. [more stuff here]
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Post by Smiles on Jun 19, 2014 20:12:39 GMT
[composing...]
Technique
Vibrato
Volume
Lyrics
Outcome
Your grader and curator and I decided that, had these pieces stood alone, they would have barely passed. However, while working on a project of this difficulty there's just a certain standard of balance and synergy that must be present in the work to warrant a pass. As a result, we're going to have to say...
Riolu, Manectric, and Pyroar not captured. Please PM us all for a re-evaluation once you take our considerations into your hands. Continue to work hard, and it'll one day be yours.
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